Jesse Owens is a great example of perseverance for many reasons. One way he showed perseverance was when his mom had to cut the lump out with a hot kitchen knife. Another way is he suffered through pneumonia.Another way Jesse Owens persevered was when people were predjudice and African Americans weren't treated fairly. I learned one thing about Jessie Owens and that is he persevered a lot through out his life.
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All good, except for the concluding sentence. Re-do the concluding sentence and I'll raise your grade.
I agree with Mr.Ferreirae.
Hi! That was a great paragraph. There was only one things wrong. All it was, was when you wrote the last sentence, your concluding one. It didn't seem like a concluding one to me.
why you do have a cuclnding sent.
I fixed it Mr. Ferrierae.
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